Justice Page 3

This is part of a set of pages I was doing to build a Portfolio. I wrote the main Idea for the pages in a way that I could show lots of accion sequences but after finishing 3 pages I dropped it, mainly because I had the Amazing oportunity of receving reviews from professionals such as Edgar Delgado and Raul Treviño. In this page I was adviced to be clearer in the order of the panels (it seems kind of confusing in the middle of the page when batman fires the torpedoes) also improve the action going on inside the panels (when doomsday is hitting green lantern,)anyway I decided to leave it like that, learn, and start a new set of pages using a script from an old issue of avengers by Brian Bendis. so I'll post some of that later!